My writings, old and new...

I've been an avid reader since I was 10 and my parents subscribed me to ''Boy's Life''. We lived in a small town without TV for 3 years; my family read as many books as we could! (My wife still occasionally mentions TV shows I've never seen; I think the books I read did me more good!) I'm going to put my opinions of books I've read and especially those I could not finish.

Wednesday, March 21, 2018


Name of the book: Creativity
          Author: unknown
    Type of book:  good advice for beginning writers

Here is something I found while looking for something quite different. I don't know who wrote it or where I found it. (It has only been 30 years after all and could have been on a BBS in Davenport Iowa.)



                                 CREATIVITY

                     Published December 1989/January 1990


         "Where do you get your ideas?" That is probably the first and
         most   popular   question   interviewers   ask  writers.  The
         implication seems  to be that  the interviewer believes  that
         writers  have  some  magical  formula  for creative thinking.
         Nothing could be further from the truth.

         For  many  years  researchers  have  sought  to  identify the
         elements that make up creativity.  The concept is so elusive,
         that they do  not fully agree on a  definition of creativity.
         Certainly, when someone  thinks of a concept that  no one has
         had  before, they  would agree  that is  creative. Many would
         agree  that if  two or  more  people  come up  with the  same
         concept  independently  that  all  are  creative. Still fewer
         would  agree on  the creativity  of the  individual who takes
         someone else's concept and applies it to a new use.

         For centuries, philosophers and  psychologists have sought to
         identify and explain the phenomena of creative thinking. More
         recently,   physiologists  and   neurologists  have   applied
         sophisticated technologies to measure brain functions. Out of
         this  work  has  come  the  left  brain, right brain concept.
         According the  their findings (theories,  if you prefer)  the
         brain is composed of two  hemishperes connected by the corpus
         callosum. The left hemisphere is  dominant in most people and
         performs the functions of logic, reason, analytical thinking,
         linear  thinking,  etc.  The   right  hemisphere,  which  was
         dominant  at  birth  and  for  the  first  few years of life,
         supplies   the   functions    associated   with   creativity,
         imagination, intuition, spacial abilities, holistic thinking,
         sense of humor, etc.

         In the arts,  much that is considered creative  would fail in
         the judgment  of the early researchers.  They would view most
         paintings, articles, and stories  as mere variations on works
         that   have   been   done   before.   The  physiologists  and
         neurologists,  less  concerned  with  rigid definitions, have
         pursued  various behavior  patterns, among  them writing  and
         other artistic kinds of activities.

         Of  particular  interest  to  writers  is  their finding that
         writers, in  general, are uncomfortable trying  to edit their
         work as they write. They do their best work when they capture
         their concepts  in a rough  draft (right brain  function) and
         later analyze  (left brain function) what  they have done and
         correct their language errors and polish the work.

         This supports the conclusions drawn by writers from their own
         experience.  Most  experienced  writers  not  only advise the
         beginner  to get  their ideas  down quickly  and revise  them
         later, but  to avoid discussing their  work before getting it
         down  on  paper  (or  on  disk).  If  the  writer expends his
         creativity in talking about what he  is going to write, he is
         wasting his creative thinking and making his actual writing a
         total brain function. He is analyzing while he is writing, an
         activity  which  neurological   research  has  identified  as
         undesirable.  This is  why writing  seems so  much more  of a
         chore after  the material has been  discussed extensively. It
         may  also partially  explain why  so many  people talk  about
         becoming writers, but never write anything.

         Whether a writer's ideas are  creative in the classical sense
         is immaterial.  His objective is  to inform and/or  entertain
         the  reader. If  he gets  his concepts  from researching  the
         literature or  reformulating his own  and others' experiences
         does  not matter.  He is  constantly stimulated  by things he
         sees, reads, and hears. He must develop the skill to react to
         these stimuli.

         So,  getting back  to the  question, "Where  do you  get your
         ideas?" I  guess I get  mine wherever I  happen to be  at the
         time.

Keep A Notebook (writer's advice)


Name of the book:  Keep A Notebook
          Author:  unknown
    Type of book:  helpful advise for beginning writers

This was written 30 years ago and I found it by accident while looking for something else on a hard drive. I don't think there is any way of finding this information.


                               KEEP A NOTEBOOK

                           Published in two parts --
                           March 1988 and April 1988

                                    PART 1

         A very important piece of advice professional writers give to
         beginners who  wish to write  fiction is to  "write from your
         experience."  Most  of  us  would  like  to  do that, but our
         memories  are dulled  by time,  making the  recall of  detail
         difficult. Yet,  it is the  detail that is  most important in
         making your writing come alive. To make up for the volatility
         of memory, they suggest that you keep a notebook.

         It is significant  that, when they give that  advice, they do
         not  qualify  it  at  all.  They  don't  say,  "If  you write
         mainstream fiction, ...," or "If you write romances, ...," or
         "If you write mysteries ..." They don't qualify it because it
         doesn't make any difference what  genre you write. Much of it
         must come out of your own experience.

         Yes,  even  science  fiction,  fantasy,  horror,  historical,
         western, or  any other category  of fiction. Obviously,  they
         are not saying that you have to  have been on Mars to write a
         story about Mars.

         However, the manner in which  your characters speak must have
         a natural  ring  for  your  characters  to  be believable. No
         matter what the physical shape  of your characters, they must
         have  recognizable traits  and behavior  patterns. We observe
         the  mannerisms of  others, listen  to their  speech, observe
         their   behavior    patterns,   their   traits    and   dress
         characteristics. Whether we realize it or not, we assign tags
         to  people  to  help  us  identify  and remember them. Memory
         courses  emphasize the  development  of  a refined  skill for
         quickly  identifying  and   assigning  appropriate  tags  and
         associating them with  the name of the person.  Such tags are
         used  liberally  in  fiction  as   part  of  the  process  of
         developing our characters.

         Most groups  develop a jargon  of their own  which identifies
         their speech. The policeman does  not say, "I going to arrest
         you." He says "I'll run you in." The brick layer doesn't work
         with "mortar." It's  "mud." You will find a  jargon which not
         only  characterizes each  group but  is also  a kind  of sub-
         language. Prime examples  are legal phraseology, computerese,
         medical  terminology  (Listen  to  your  doctor.  Instead  of
         telling  you to  soak in  the tub,  he'll tell  you to take a
         sits-bath.), governmentese, and Black English. If your cowboy
         sounds like  an English professor  or truck driver,  he won't
         come alive for the reader. You need to know the difference.

         Descriptions   of  scenery,   no  matter   how  bizarre   and
         unearth-like,  must  relate  in  some  way  to  some familiar
         landscape or it cannot be  conveyed adequately for the reader
         to  "see" it  properly. There   are some  things that  are so
         impressionable that you will  remember them clearly -- things
         like  the  Grand  Canyon  or  Niagra  Falls.  But,  how  many
         variations of sun rise and sun set do you remember in detail?
         How much detail  do you remember of your  last trip to places
         like Williamsburg,  Monticello, the movie set  of San Antonio
         and the  Alamo at Brackettville? Impressions  remain, but the
         details are fleeting.

         It is also important to  understand that your experience goes
         beyond  the activities  in which  you have  actually engaged.
         Your  experience  includes  those  things  you  have seen, or
         heard, or even, in some cases, read. You can expand the scope
         of  your experience  through research.  Most of  the time,  a
         writer's  research   is  geared  to  fill   in  gaps  in  his
         experience.  The  writer  will   generally  have  some  basic
         knowledge of the subject and  is looking for detail to supply
         the sense of authenticity needed.

         A properly maintained  notebook can be  a priceless tool  for
         supplying the detail  which can make the reader  feel that he
         is part  of the scene, part  of the action. It  can help make
         the reader feel the emotion the writer wishes to convey.

         We  will  pursue  this  subject  next  month and discuss what
         should go into  the notebook and suggest ways  to organize it
         to make the material readily accessible.


                                  PART 2

         The big questions on keeping  a notebook are, "What should go
         into  it?" and  "How should   it be  organized?" Many  of the
         articles  on keeping  a notebook  tell what  kinds of  things
         should go into it, but rarely  how to make maximum use of the
         entries once  they have been  put into the  notebook. This is
         critical to  keeping a notebook, because  the information you
         so laboriously collect is worthless if you can't find it when
         you need it.

         Your  notebook should  contain detailed  observations. As you
         observe  things of  interest, you  should immediately  record
         them. This seems to necessitate that you have a notebook with
         you at all times. That view is somewhat idealistic. There are
         times when it just isn't practical,  but most of the time you
         can plan  to have a small  pad of paper and  a pencil. If you
         are  serious about  your notebook,  you will  manage to  have
         something to write on when the occasion arises.

         Many of the things you put  into your notebook will be useful
         writing exercises -- vignettes, if you prefer. When you see a
         particularly interesting landscape, write a description of it
         right then,  while you can see  the detail. Make a  record of
         various kinds  of incidents. For  example, if you  get into a
         disagreement  with a  sales clerk,  write a  scene as soon as
         possible,  covering  the  action,  complete  with  dialog and
         emotion. Record the exact words as best you can remember them
         and how you felt during the encounter.

         Record interesting  comments or specialized  language usages.
         The  way  a  politician  evades  a  sensitive  question is an
         interesting use  of language, and  one which would  be easily
         forgotten. Interesting phraseology, or colorful dialog should
         be recorded, along with the  identification of the source and
         circumstances.  Many times  an idle  comment later  developes
         into an article or short story.

         Useful  ideas  should  be  entered  immediately.  I sometimes
         forget ideas as quickly as I thought them in the first place,
         if I  don't write them down.  I may recall them  again later,
         but  I  can  never  be  sure  of  it.  I go through cycles of
         recording  my dreams  as soon  as  I  wake up.  If I  put off
         recording  my dreams  immediately, I  usually can't  remember
         them later.

         Character sketches  of people we know,  and first impressions
         of  people   we  meet  are   particularly  valuable  entries.
         Descriptions  of mannerisms,  tics, traits,  tatoos, physical
         characteristics, hair styles, manner of dress, all contribute
         toward building believable characters.

         Use your  imagination; be observant; be  sensitive to what is
         going on  around you. Trivialities, some  of which won't even
         concern you,  are among the  things which will  make a useful
         notebook.

         Although  this  recording  process   is  generally  called  a
         notebook, it may  not physically be a notebook  at all. If it
         is, I  suggest that you do  not use a bound  notebook. One in
         which  the pages  can be  removed readily  and filed  in some
         logical  order is  much more  practical. The  problem with  a
         bound notebook is that it  becomes a chronological record. To
         find   anything,  you   have  to   scan  through   the  pages
         sequentially, which may be quite  a chore after you have gone
         into several  volumes. File cards  work very well,  also, and
         have the advantage of not being bulky.

         The key to  a useful notebook is organization.  If each entry
         is made on a separate page the pages may be removed and filed
         by topic, either in a file box or in a file folder. By filing
         all scenic items together,  all character items together, all
         plot  ideas together,  etc., you  make finding  what you need
         easier.

Monday, March 19, 2018

'2018 novel.doc

This is the start of my 2018 novel.

In my 2015 novel, I told the story of Dent and family and their escape was told.

My 2017 story was about their lives once they found sanctuary.

There was a throwaway line in2015 about three identical sets of fetuses being created. Dent et al knew about themselves and not the other two groups. Group two went to The Temple of the Way and the third was taken to +Bay Root+ in our world.

Novel three will be about establishing the lives of these fetuses in the temple. Dents wife will be told her 4 kids will be able to find mates. These stories will be put in archives hidden behind apparently blank walls in the second basement. The modern folks will find them only after a reference to this cache is found in a story published in the Central City some small number of years after Dent started publishing stories.

Group three was raised to be soldiers, spies and scientists. Their basic education was similar to that5 of Dent but with math and physics. The Temple folks id more basic Dent and included a

great deal of basic research.

Magic involved quantum connection between objects with a knowledge of physics I think I need to invoke either a quantum computer or angels or demons. I think I will cheat and go with talking with something that talks back. Spells must be discussed with this creature and programmes/outlines are created. When the base of these spells is sufficient, only advanced Mages need talk/with the unknown creature.

Talk about questions of religion.

Dent: continue story.

Bay Root: their raising, rebellion and moving to hidden estates for survival and lives of research. Why not scientist/assassins?

Temple: story of kids growing up in mixed groups of humans and modified ones. Trouble keeping the two groups from courting. Finally, established a group of members of Temple south of Big City along the river they become part of the central peoples.

I will have to spend some time working on this. Maybe some linked Anderson plots? (By linked I mean several occurrences with the same resolution...)

........................................................

In my 2015 novel, they left several people in the People of the Valley home. Will they intermarry? Will their children marry into families in the Hidden City? Could the People of the Central Nation connect them with the Wizards east of Lebanon? Perhaps some of them could go to the Valley? Could have the distant people meet them? Perhaps they could be the heart of Dent's assassins?

I picture Dent going to a tavern and meeting his genetic other from the far east. Will have to invent story from there...

After Dent's wife enters Temple, she finds out about clones being there Limit time they had spent at Temple to visiting humans in small area with the clones deeper in the Temple.

Have clones come to meet her days after she and kids arrived.

Have search party look for them but loose the. when they turn south.




































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