My writings, old and new...

I've been an avid reader since I was 10 and my parents subscribed me to ''Boy's Life''. We lived in a small town without TV for 3 years; my family read as many books as we could! (My wife still occasionally mentions TV shows I've never seen; I think the books I read did me more good!) I'm going to put my opinions of books I've read and especially those I could not finish.

Wednesday, August 30, 2023

Additions to 2016 novel

Forrest < P > < p > < p > Beautiful forrest shinning green < p > I forget the pain in my spleen < p > Animal and birds and fish enjoy < p > the very good life, oh boy! < p > < p > < p > We don't hear the sound of screams < p > save in the time of our dreams < p > of animals suffering in the trees dark < p > from blood and pain bled on their bark. < p > < p > < p > It is a world hiden deep < p > a place for old terrors to sleep < p > a world travelors sight < p > and stay on the river day and night < p >
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will go see prez later camp settles down next day boy is hugging Father... Mother.. punches Father.. cries when he hurts his fists... Father tells boy to calm himself they move to city of Big Feet... meet various nembers of each human type many were taken to heaven by God resume telling stories of the people they contuinued moving north and then east when the night beacon (north star)) stood same height above horizon... they then began moving toward the rising sun. overtook rest of people north of himelations. they had been hounded ny outsiders who took cattle and horses. Veiled Wolf lead group toward rustlers and stole their cattle and horses... they just had to call to the animals. Veiled Wolf and his party may simply have looked too dangerous to fuck with... spent time at home came back stayed at monestary of folks searching for meaning of life... tyey had developed forms of movement later called martial arts. vicious virga mastered this in 51 year, lessor ergrot in 80 years anMd veiled wolf in 102 years. he said documenting the studies made him slow... younger scribes did as much bscribe work and were faster learners... they returned to the homeland and moved the remaining Neaderthals to yelliwstone, thus emptying eurasia of neanderthal and denebsarians this took a century. they returned to the city and found it buried in trees... God told them to take the opeople in the forrest to eastern end of the great water. on way west they went to three villages... walked thru a bay with an enterance channel thru high and steep hills covered with boulders. they learned to make fishing boats and nets and went east to this hidden bat... made housing... started fishing... storms and large hail... birds fleeing inland... strange fish (porpuses) and sharks seen rushing out to deep water.. then.quakes... saw arc. {use earlier description}... their village in ring shaped structue like a caldera with many transparant hard stone... later identified these as diamonds went to Egypt and found people of the woods had taught folks to write. they had lost track of time and found new folks were building walled cities and later nations everywhere. they spent many decades saving the writings of the peoples of the mediterrean. these people gave copies of records. when they learned a great library was saving books, they started sending books to it. vw and his people began living in egypt. on a trading caravan... they learned of a holy man... God was non commital about him. watched holy man crusified on X shaped structure between two thieves. watched holy man die quickly. helped take him down and wives tried consoling holy man widow and little daughter. Found his aide strangling after attempted hangins... took him down... gave him water and listened to him give his story (kater called Book Of Judus). then Judus wished he had not been pressured into betraying his friend... beautific smile, says he forgives me and dies. they watched his soul leave his body and a ghostly hand take Judus hand... later group took
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Extra stories:@ After reading the entire 2016 novel (except the ending in Turkey), I realized the only way to incoorate these stories would be as stories told individually around the camp fire.@@ I am going to change the final story . I will also need to clarify who is speaking... See the Arc @ Realize God is moving the Arc. Go on road trip to land of Hamnurbi. What land this was and the time.@@ Alexandra@@ Brillant female M athematican... save her life... convince "Christian" to agree with lo that she was as violently killed . Tells him she was moved from the area. "Saint" suggests they move the Library into the deep South and into one of the old cities. L ater , this will be found, after the original home is found in Turkey...@@ God moved the Library... News says the Library was found with 30 foot high status of Viewed Wolf...@@